by Jason
(Ocean city, MD (USA))
Original Text: Affordable Graphics & Wedding Photography!
Innovative Graphfics and Formal Photography is offering its off season services at new low low prices. We specialize in event photography including weddings of all types. We are professional and always
affordable. We have a verity of packages for weddings all of them include a DVD slide show and ALL rights to the photos to use as you please. Contact us today to schedual your apointments and to look at our extensive portfolio of photographs or differnt events. You can call our office at xxx-xxx-xxxx or email us at xxxxxxxxxxxxx. Addresses and personal identifications are deleted for privacy reasons.
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Revised Text:
Innovative Graphics and Formal Photography is offering off season services at new low, low prices. We specialize in event photography, including weddings of all types. We are professional and always affordable.
We have a variety of packages for weddings, all of which include a DVD slide show and ALL rights to the photos to use as you please. Contact us today to schedule your appointment and to view our extensive portfolio of photographs of many different events. You can call our office at xxx-xxx-xxxx or email us at xxxxxxxxxxxxx.
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