by Ceza
(Egypt)
Original Text:
i want to complain about two things. the first thing is that the teachers aren't so much concerned about children's behavior, and the second thing is that the English language is too weak. My son joined the school having a very good pronunciation , and by the end of the semester my son had forgotten what I've taught him starting from how to pronounce it to what it is.
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Revised Text:
I want to complain about two things. First, is that the teachers aren't much concerned about the children's behavior, and secondly that English language learning is too weak.
My son entered the school having very good pronunciation, and by the end of the semester my son had forgotten what I had taught him of how to pronounce it.
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