Original Text: Course Project
As far as my first research interest is cryptography, I would like to do something in the field. As a result I want to choose wireless security as my project topic and I know this topic is general but I have to go through some papers before I can choose the right topic of my project.
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Revised Text:
As my first research interest is cryptography, I would like to do something in this field. I want to choose wireless security as my project topic. I know this topic is general, so I need to go through some papers before I choose the best topic of my project.
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