by Ahasan
(Virginia)
Original Text: Email
In this particular case the validation did not take place cause the user had JavaScript turned off on their computer, and therefore the customer was able to bypass the process without providing the credit card information.
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Revised Text:
In this particular case, the validation did not take place because the user's computer had JavaScript turned off. Therefore, the customer was able to bypass the process without providing the credit card information.
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