For.Crazy.Dreamers

by Crazy Dreamer

Original Text: For.Crazy.Dreamers

An idea is all that you need to start writing. I am going to turn 25 in few days, so I was surfing internet seeking ideas for celebrating my 25th birthday but then I came across an interesting blog. So I thought of writing my own.
The blog was about fulfilling someone’s dream. Now honestly I don’t have the resources or money to fulfill anyone’s dream, but I can give you an opportunity to pen down a dream you are crazy about, share it with the world. A lot of times we have a dream and then we forget about it with time. You need to answer the following questions.
The dream you crazy about-

How strongly do you believe in it-

What are you doing to make it your reality-

By when do you think you will be able to live your dream- MM/DD/YYYY

Your email address.

Now I’ll send an email to the email address specified on the date you have mentioned to see if you get it or not.

Wish you luck!!

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Revised Text:

An idea is all that you need to start writing. I am going to turn 25 in few days, so I was surfing the internet seeking ideas for celebrating my 25th birthday when I came across an interesting blog and I thought of writing my own.

The blog was about fulfilling someone’s dream. Now honestly, I don’t have the resources or money to fulfill anyone’s dream, but I can give you an opportunity to write down a dream you are crazy about and share it with the world. Many times we have a dream and then we forget about it in time.

You need to answer the following questions:

  • The dream you crazy about

  • How strongly you believe in it

  • What you are doing to make it a reality

  • When you think that you will be able to live your dream; MM/DD/YYYY

  • Your email address.


I’ll send an email to the address specified on the date you give to see if your dream has come true, or not.

Wishing you luck!

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Thanks for making the corrections. It's been a great help. Would it be possible for you to give the explanations?

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