Original Text: Gratitude Email
Hi all,
Congratulations on clearing the training successfully.
Though you are receiving well deserved appreciation from everywhere, I couldn’t hold myself back.
I just wanted to wish you luck; don’t forget your success depends on the success of this project.
Make the best of this opportunity by giving the best of yourself.
Good Luck!
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Revised Text:
Hi All,
Congratulations on clearing the training successfully.
You are receiving well deserved appreciation from everywhere, and I couldn’t hold myself back. I just want to wish you luck.
Don’t forget that your success depends on the success of this project. Make the best of this opportunity by giving the best of yourself.
Good Luck,
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