Original Text: Mail
Dear Sir,
I am Pathologist working as Assistant Professor in Pathology in SRM group's Chennai Medical College and Research with an experience of 4 years as Assistant Professor and an overall experience of 14 years as a Pathologist. Presently I am looking for a change in my job, and as it is learnt that there could be a vacancy for the post of Assistant Professor in Pathology in your esteemed institute, I am submitting my professional resume as mail attachment for your kind consideration and favourable response.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully,
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Revised Text:
Dear Sir,
I am a Pathologist working as Assistant Professor of Pathology in SRM Group's Chennai Medical College and Research. My experience includes 4 years as Assistant Professor and an overall experience of 14 years as a Pathologist.
I am presently looking for a change in my position, and have learned that there could be a vacancy for the post of Assistant Professor in Pathology at your institute. I am submitting my professional resume as a mail attachment and look forward to your kind consideration and favourable response.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
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