by Ambachew
(Geneva)
Original Text: Memo
I am writing to kindly remind you that I am waiting to receive your assessments on the project reports.
preparing updates to the PSC/Board and feedback to the implementing partners would not be complete without your input.
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Revised Text:
I am writing to kindly remind you that I am still waiting to receive your assessments on the project reports.
Preparing updates to the PSC/Board, and feedback to the implementing partners, cannot be completed without your input.
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