Original Text: Minority Right
Because of the minorities -Turkmen, Yezidi, Sabian, Shabak, Christian- group in Iraq are distributed among Iraqi provinces and live together with other ethnic groups therefore the minorities are not given a veto right, but as explain formerly in point number they cultural autonomy they are given a right to use their language in their schools.
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Revised Text: Minority Rights
Because the minority groups in Iraq; Turkmen, Yezidi, Sabian, Shabak, Christians, are distributed among the Iraqi provinces and live together with other ethnic groups, the minorities are not given a veto right. But as explained formerly in point number X, they have cultural autonomy and are given the right to use their languages in their schools.
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