Newsletter

by Kung
(Siem Reap,Cambodia)

Newsletter: Original Text

As a rule of thumb , every two years, we always pick up to cooperate with two more health centers. The health centers should be stayed in our selection criteria for interaction, after we selected them we introduce our project implementation to the local authority and relevant stakeholders in order to get support as mainstay. For this 2010 we had selected the health centers of Dan Run and Ta Yek.

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Revised Text:

As a rule of thumb, every two years we choose to cooperate with two more health centers. The health centers should be within our selection criteria for consideration.

After selection, we introduce our project implementation to the local authority and relevant stakeholders in order to gain their support. For this year,2010, we have selected the health centers of Dan Run and Ta Yek.

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