Original Text: Sales and Marketing
Hi Everyone,
Please kindly take a look at some of the jobs that we have completed at Four Points Platinum.
We are here to assist you in generating more revenue at a lesser expense.
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Revised Text:
Hi Everyone,
Please take a look at some of the jobs that we have completed at Four Points Platinum.
We are here to assist you in generating more revenue at less expense.
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