The Amazing Internet

by Crystal
(Corpus Christi)

Original Text: The Amazing Internet

A few years ago it would probably have took more time and effort to find all this in formation. You might have find a long-range weather forecast in the newspaper.

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Revised Text:

A few years ago it would probably have taken more time and effort to find all of this information.

You might have found a long-range weather forecast in the newspaper.

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