by Shirley Lu
(Seattle, WA USA)
Original Text: Tuition Reimbursement
As our financial system advances, many of the entry level tasks will be eliminated progressively.
Continuing education in Accounting will enhance my present position by understanding more of accounting concepts in order to improve processing procedures, auditing skills, and allowing myself more opportunities to serve the Finance Department.
The Washington State University Online Program will not only provide me the flexibility to achieve mygoal in retrieving the Degree in Accounting and will not interrupt my schedule and my performance at work.
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Revised Text:
As our financial system advances, many entry level tasks will be progressively eliminated.
Continuing education in Accounting will enhance my present position by giving more understanding of accounting concepts in order to improve processing procedures, auditing skills, and by allowing more opportunities for me to serve the Finance Department.
The Washington State University Online Program will not only provide me the opportunity to achieve my goal of earning a Degree in Accounting, it will not interrupt my schedule or performance at work.
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