by Jane White
(Tennessee)
Original Text: Whether you think you can or you can't, you're right.
The Bible says " so a man thinketh so is he". I believe that you can do anything that you set your mind to accomplish. If you believe that you will be a failure then you will.
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Revised Text:
The Bible says "...so a man thinketh so is he". I believe that you can do anything you set your mind to accomplish. If you believe that you will be a failure, you will.
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